Welcome to WOL, Allan. You definitely have flair, a sympathy with words and exactness of detail that creates fine imagery. Your sample poem is also strong and emotive. I look forward to more.
Work 'flair' with 'care'.
Be prepared to 'share' only your best
And your poems will 'wear' well!
I'm just being silly. It's the lure of our English language to mess around with words that have the same sound through so many different spellings. But it is good advice.
Cynthia
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Michelle Smith
Sun 20th Nov 2016 01:54
Wow this is beautiful.
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