I need help in this online competition, voting closes at noon on NYE
http://manorlogz.co.uk/play/Other/Mark_Thompson
Been involved in this comeptition since July, really need people to register on the website and then click on the stars below the video to vote for me!
Thursday 30th December 2010 9:20 pm
Personal possibility
There is a part of us whose sums equal we can never be,
It is the part that leads to disappointment and discontent,
But please don't be overpowered by a self-created sense of self-resentment,
Because these parts of us we just can't catch
And the distant pace setter that we can't ever hope to match,
Well these are just a definition of our own personal poss...
Wednesday 29th December 2010 11:58 pm
A less formal (peformance based) approach to analysing my lyricism
My definition in rhyme.
I write rhyme
Because, I like rhyme.
I like rhyme
Because sometimes, rhyme rights me.
Sometimes, me, I fight rhymes,
Sometimes, rhyme fights for me.
But I never bite rhymes,
Because I likes mines.
See they mine my mind so deep
That even I don’t know what they’ll find.
If this was cranial surgery, my loved ones would weep,
...Wednesday 29th December 2010 11:21 am
Poetic theme developed
A poet is just a maker of connections.
You can’t think without connecting concepts,
Or speak without synergising sounds,
You cannot write without linking letters, verbs, adjectives and nouns.
To perform requires an audience,
Reflections are simply waves in thought or light.
You can only describe any one thing based on sensory references coloured by personal i...
Wednesday 29th December 2010 11:16 am
Moving the same theme towards poetry
The poetry, like beauty, is in the poet's eyes,
The art is in distilling it in a lyrical guise.
Taking the truth of a transient vision that is distinctly personal,
To weave words into an immortal form, transcendent and universal.
Wednesday 29th December 2010 11:13 am
More on a theme
The loved-one's aura
We often cannot see ourselves
As well as those who love us can.
Whilst aware of contour, shade and colour,
Even the highest definition vision,
Will often fail to sense, the loved-one's aura..
If it's not that we are lacking in sight,
Perhaps it's that near undetectable reflected light,
From the beholder's eye, that makes us glow so brightly.
Enhancing...
Wednesday 29th December 2010 11:00 am
Hardly original, but still my perspective
Beauty is openness,
beauty is truth,
beauty is not the shallow absence of imperfections
absent mindedly bestowed by youth.
In notions objects and places,
it's far easier to be objective about the subject
of this most subjective of emotions
than it is when we consider faces.
For beauty in people goes deeper,
lasts longer,
is marked over years
...
Tuesday 28th December 2010 11:59 pm
Something a little more formal!
In the half-light
We were supposed to wake in half-light,
Before the breaking of the dawn,
At the dying of night time and birthing of the morn.
Our eyes crave a moment of adjustment
In which to recalibrate,
As sub-conscious cogs turn and internal switches flick back to early, from late.
We weren’t designed to rise in darkness,
Our sleep should n...
Tuesday 28th December 2010 2:59 pm
Manorlogz
Hi all check out this on-line slam, the semi finals and finals of which are featured on Sky Showcase 2 (Sky channel 203) on the 14th and 21st of December 2010 (I'm in the final).
The overall winner will be decided by the on-line public vote.
http://manorlogz.co.uk/index.php.
Thursday 9th December 2010 12:14 am
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