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Charlie Rawcliffe

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Favourite Lines

Hello there! I'm brand new to the lovely world of Write Out Loud, so apologies if this has been done before.

I was just wondering what peoples' favourite lines they've ever written were.

Mine would be:

'I love the taste of cigarettes on your lips. It might be killing you, but it makes me feel alive.'
Thu, 24 Nov 2011 02:18 pm
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steve mellor

Not a line/s that I've written, but my favourite line from a song (poetic writer? Paul Simon) towards the end of 'A Train in the Distance'

"the thought that life could be better is woven indelibly into our hearts and brains"
Thu, 24 Nov 2011 03:08 pm
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I’m lower case type that inhabits the basement
where jars and saucepans in a slapdash placement
create an imperfect kind of enjambment

employed to collect red wine and sushi,
filter and ferment into something fruity;
that’s my trickle-down theory of beauty.
Thu, 24 Nov 2011 03:24 pm
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Charlie Rawcliffe

Steve, if I had to pick a line from a song it'd be Josh Ritter:

"All the other girls here are stars, you are the northern lights. They try to shine in through your curtain, but you're too close and too bright."

Paul Simon's fantastic though, although it was a bit gutting that he had a throat problem when I saw him at Glasto this summer.
Thu, 24 Nov 2011 04:15 pm
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beep beep beep beep
late blackbird apes
as I set the alarm

are my favourite opening lines from my own poems (they're from a poem called Autumn Almanac.)

I just like the fact that I can get away with it...

Thu, 24 Nov 2011 04:41 pm
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"They will come again, the leaf and flower, to arise
From squalor of rottenness into the old splendour,
And magical scents to a wondering memory bring
The same glory, to shine upon different eyes.
Earth cares for her own ruins, nought for ours.
Nothing is certain, only the certain
spring."
(Laurence Binyon)
Those lines bring a tear whenever I
read them or hear them read.
Thu, 24 Nov 2011 08:59 pm
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Lately its been this -

But a dark other Adam is dreaming
a neuter moon of seedless stone
where the child of light will burn.

Adam - Lorca
Fri, 25 Nov 2011 01:33 pm
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The finest lines of verse ever to come out of Chapel Haddlesey are
"I pined wi' unrequited love -
I'd never 'ad a shag;
Mi 'eart 'ung 'eavy wi' chagrin -
Mi balls like saddlebags".
When I wrote it I cried.
Wed, 30 Nov 2011 10:23 pm
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