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I have a bedroom full of rooks and roses

A willow tree grows on my window sill

A cooing owl is perched upon my wardrobe

And down my staircase runs a rippling rill.

 

An iron cooking pot steams in the kitchen

A woodworm table stands upon the floor

A hundred candles gleaming in the twilight

A golden heart, the knocker on my door.

 

A silken rug as thick and lush as swansdown

And beaded cushions of antique design

The sea is captured on an azure canvas

A black cat graces this sweet home of mine.

 

And can I tempt you in to share my eyrie?

To be enchanted and to spend some time

Within these four walls that I have created?

I can assure you that the pleasure would be mine.

 

But if you hesitate upon the threshold

Then that is also quite alright with me

I have my joys, my secrets and my treasures

A place of wonder, if only for me.

 

But if you want to see a room of roses

With owls and rooks cavorting up above

Remember on my door, the heart shaped knocker

Remember here within, a house of love.

 

 

 

 

 

◄ Venusienne

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 22:42

My crow, Annie, sends her caws to your beautiful rook! She has asked if she may roost there. What a beautiful room/poem! xx

Rachel Bond

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 22:12

ooo i love this..do you really have rooks and roses in your bedroom? how dyou get the rooks to stay? in fact how do you get anything to stay for longer than a moment and when you do does it all get noisy messy and smell bad and you just want your plain old roses back cos theyre lovely as they are?..i think this is charming like a spellx thanks

ive responded to your last comments on 'so poor...' on my page x

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 20:14

No hedgehogs on the menu though! xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 15:00

'cooing' and 'whooing' aside, this is really charming, graceful and inviting. Embraceable imagination is a wonderful thing.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 14:12

Ooops, maybe it's an eerie eyrie! Must be all those cooing owls! I guess owls don't coo in the bird books, but it sounded softer and sweeter and that was the effect I wanted. So I spent many days training my owl to say "coooo" ;-) Strictly speaking I don't have a stream running down my stairs either! Not yet anyway! xx

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Ray Miller

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 13:59

I like it, especially the first three verses, pleasingly simple. It's eyrie, by the way, not eerie!

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winston plowes

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 13:22

great ann. lovely stuff and a nice ending to this gentle one. However do owls coo? hoot or call ?

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