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Reading On The Road

I'm sat on the number 61 bus

after visiting my therapist

....Tesco Express....

I'm on the 61 bus because

I have an attention deficit

....Persian Rug and Gift Centre....

I discovered it last Saturday -

well, my missus found it for me -

....Nightingale Jewellery....

when she came home unexpectedly

as I was watching TV

....Mud....

it was horse racing from Worcester

and I had James Brown on a CD

....Selly Oak Cycles....

football on the computer

and a book by Dostoyevsky

....Majid Abdul Fish and Chips....

in my hand, all at the same time.

She wore the dress that she'd just bought

and her hair was cut and dyed

....Posh Pets....

when she asked me what I thought

I unthinkingly replied

....Dragon Fashions Tattoos....

that the Villa look like winning

James Brown's the King of Soul Music

....Bohemia....

my horse lost in a photo-finish

and Raskolnikov has blew it

....Selly Sausage....

without bothering to look up.

She reckoned that I need some help,

counselling or a therapist

....Beds Direct....

"you're in a world all by yourself

you've got an Attention Deficit!"

....Farce and Firkin....

when I proclaimed my innocence

she explained that's just a symptom

....Suizen's Noodle Bar....

"Oppositional Defiance"

I missed the 3.15 from Kempton

....Big John's Fast Food....

So I went to see the therapist,

there were six of us -Group Therapy

....Trattoria Giancarlo....

I told them of my deficit

and my wife got all their sympathy

....Ali Baba Lebanese Coffee....

A basic course of CBT

was the therapist's suggestion

....Riley's....

how to focus on reality

and pay it full attention

....Acropolis Now....

curbing selfish tendencies

would brighten my prognosis

....Kebab Land....

then the others aired their grievances

but I didn't take much notice

....Munchies....

Still, I've made these mental notes

while on the bus returning

....Bettie's Tea Rooms....

of all the shops in Selly Oak

I'm passing on my journey

....Taj Mahal....

now we're coming to my stop

I feel attentive and alert

....Sundarbon....

but as I'm waiting to get off

my inner harmony's disturbed

....Tiger-Lou's Nail Bar....

the driver of number 61

uses elbows for the steering

....Mamma Mia....

and his hands to turn the pages of

the novel that he's reading

....Shangri-La....

All the way to town and back

he's weaved a route by magic

....The Knife and Fork....

reading On The Road by Kerouac

without looking at the traffic

....Dotcomicide....

I wrote the name of my therapist

in the margin of page 23

....The Ragged Staff....

"you've got an Attention Deficit

take my seat in Group Therapy!

....Chez Moi....

My need is rather less than yours,

how on earth do you drive a bus.....?"

....Juggling and Kites....

he opened automatic doors

without bothering to look up.

◄ Analgesia

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Ray Miller

Mon 3rd May 2010 11:20

Thanks Greg. A friend drew my attention to a story a couple of weeks ago of a bus driver in Birmingham who'd been sacked for reading a book whilst driving his bus.A passenger posted a clip on You Tube.I was sort of challenged to write about it. I'd love to know what he was reading!Probably not On The Road!I have this idea now of performing it using cardboard signs with shop names on like Dylan did with Subterranean Homesick Blues.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 3rd May 2010 10:19

Ray, I loved this. I think that all poets must have attention deficit disorders, or else they'd miss so much going on around them. As you certainly haven't in this poem. You virtually provide a video with it, so many sights seen out of the window. And as for the bus driver reading On The Road ...!

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