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Soul and body purified

I had walked for miles

my feet were sore

I sat on the bank

of the little brook

rumbling through

the woodland

and rested for awhile

 

I took my boots

and socks off

 

then I dipped my

weary feet

in the saddle tan

coloured waters

of the stream

 

a shoal of

curious minnows

came and sweept

the soles of my feet

giving me an instant

tickling pedicure

oh what joy

 

whilst my feet

were being pampered

my eyes were

being entertained too

 

by fish leaping

out of water

and plucking flies

from the air

for a treat

 

by swooping swallows

giving

a masterclass

in aerial fly catching

 

by blackbirds

magpies

jays

robins

and thrushes

foraging in trees

 

when my feet were soothed

I put my socks

and boots

back on

 

I locked natures gifts 

in my mind

and I was safely

guided back home

by the 

sweet scents

of the woods

and the wild garlic 

aromas drifting

in the gentle breeze

 

my soul

and body

were purified

 

 

 

 

 

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◄ Tempting smile

Yearning for the freedom of the open skies ►

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 14th Jun 2020 17:17

Anyone who has the good fortune to sit for a while and recognise the
pleasures of the natural world will surely identify with these enjoyable
lines. Like being there!

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Abdul Ahmad

Sat 13th Jun 2020 12:55

Thank you Cynthia for your advice. I agree with you entirely that one should endeavour to spell words correctly. My aged fingers struggle to hit right keys in the right sequence on a tiny telephone keyboard at times. Not a good excuse I agree.

Grammar can sometimes detract from the flow of the sentence and a little poetic licence doesn't necessarily ruin the expression of the desired thought.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 13th Jun 2020 12:22

This is lovely, Abdul, totally inclusive of all poets.

(You are published on a world site; make a quick check for spelling and grammar. eg. thrushes)

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kJ Walker

Sat 13th Jun 2020 07:36

The simple pleasures of life described so marvellously. I really enjoyed this one Abdul.

Cheers Kevin

MortimerBlooming

Sat 13th Jun 2020 01:32

Now this is a very welcoming sight, one which is necessary considering how the world is coming to be

Mortimer

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Abdul Ahmad

Fri 12th Jun 2020 20:49

Alive_sunflower and Po

Thank you for your encouraging comments and for hitting like.

Abdul

Alive_sunflower

Fri 12th Jun 2020 20:26

A gorgeous poem
Thanks a million

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