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To Try Is Human, To Strive, Divine

Sweet summer sunshine

And her warm embrace,

Her radiance, as pale as egg-whites,

Veils her face. 

 

She shies away from you and I 

Behind the soufflé of clouds, 

Mighty and high,

Far, far away from the mortal crowd. 

 

Or perhaps she's afraid 

Of the power we hold

To birth, sunder and devastate

Those shaped from the same dough. 

 

Fragile feeble fingers 

Find themselves placed against pursed lips 

Of those who espouse silence silver. 

Pretty powerless tulips. 

 

Their hands are calloused and bruised 

Since long ago they spoke too much. 

They now find solace in quietude, 

And that's okay, 'cause to try is human. 

 

They're afraid 

Of the power we hold 

To birth, sunder and devastate 

Those shaped from the same dough. 

 

Bold beautiful bodies

Don their scarred faces with pride, 

Like intricate veins on silver leaves, 

Bathing in moonlight, serene and divine. 

 

They who stand up for those, 

Whose feet are shackled by prickly vines, 

Sport crowns immersed in the finest pools of gold. 

To strive for things larger than yourself is divine.

 

They're not afraid 

Of the power we hold 

To birth, sunder and devastate 

Those shaped from the same dough. 

 

Shifa

 

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Shifa Maqba

Sun 26th Jul 2020 05:24

Shehariah, thank you for your kind remark! Glad to see someone share my proclivity for poetic devices :D

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Shehariah

Sun 26th Jul 2020 04:49

I love the alliteration and the line “To strive for things larger than yourself is divine.”

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Tue 23rd Jun 2020 07:45

Shifa, my life has been like a novel, it still is, yes I still love el Pintor but between us our pain for that girl is breaking our hearts a well as a sculptor we know xx

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 05:32

Hey Nicola! Really appreciate your wonderful comment. To be called someone who reminds you of sunshine and light is perhaps the best compliment one can receive. Thanks!

<Deleted User> (13740)

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 05:20

I second that, beautiful poetry, x you remind me of me of sunshine and light all in between, x

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 18th Jun 2020 18:09

Thank you Po for your wonderful comment! :D

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 18th Jun 2020 10:34

Thank you, Mortimer! Glad you enjoyed reading this piece.

MortimerBlooming

Thu 18th Jun 2020 09:09

This is something really beautiful Shifa and quite empowering.

I love the imagery here and the passionate flame with which you write these words.

Truly a motivated soul

Mortimer

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