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Eternal Youth

Eternal Youth

 

The elixir was a disappointment

as the mirror reflected no noticeable change

I stared glumly as good money had been wasted

not one blemish had been removed

nor one wrinkle concealed or subdued

I had vigorously rubbed it all in, lavishly so

a few drops had even caressed my tongue

Fuelled with enthusiasm I was now dejected

all had been in vein, a useless effort

The uphill road had taken its toll

as the ravages of time had clawed at my complexion

I was old, unattractive and invisible

An empty jar begged to be replenished

but I was too tired, the victim of age and time

It remained empty to be discarded

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◄ A Common Wealth

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jennifer Malden

Wed 15th Jul 2020 08:33

How very sad and melancholic, Keith. Can't be autobiographical if your photo is recent!

Jennifer

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 14th Jul 2020 19:21

The advantage of age?
No need to assuage
The expectation of others
That stifles and smothers. ?.

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