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A Lullaby of Loss

(Inspired by Death With Dignity, Sufjan Stevens)

Stoic and sober silence, I can feel you,
Like a blanket draped 'round me
When I'm down with flu.
Why don't you speak?
Decimated dreams, I can see you
Even in the stark bleak.
The color of coal.
When will you heal?
Whispers of floating phantoms, I can hear you,
When you hover over my cot
And sing a berceuse.
Why did you stop?
Flowers prefacing tombstones, I catch a whiff of you.
Your perfume infuses the wind
And fills my room.
Why did you wilt?
With the power of my senses, I can reel you in,
But not in totality.
Instead in myriad minuscule fractions.
Will we ever meet?

Shifa

Sufjan Stevens- Death With Dignity

 

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 30th Jul 2020 19:56

John, your remarks & observations are greatly appreciated. Thank you!

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John Marks

Wed 29th Jul 2020 21:32

berceuse
/bɛːˈsəːz/
noun
a lullaby.

I liked the subtle use of rhyme, that with a staccato rhythm leant much to the effect of your words. A dead flower, a passing hour.

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Shifa Maqba

Sun 26th Jul 2020 03:16

Thank you, Po, for leaving delightful remarks as always! The song may have helped me conceptualize the crux of this poem, but it's poets & well-wishers like you who inspire me to write everyday. Couldn't thank you enough for your overwhelming support!

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Shifa Maqba

Sat 25th Jul 2020 18:13

Thank you, Ruth, for your kind words!

Thanks, Abdul, Leon & Rosemary, for leaving a rose each!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 25th Jul 2020 14:36

Really like your portrayal of presence beyond the physical in this piece!

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 23rd Jul 2020 17:20

Thank you, Jennifer, for stopping by & leaving such a generous remark!

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jennifer Malden

Thu 23rd Jul 2020 16:57

Beautiful and so well written. Jennifer

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