MORE RAIN
I watched the rain from a doorway
in shadow pools as dark as light blinded
in a monumental longitude.
With freedom and the urgency of gravity
it shed itself
under a constant sky
taking no prisoners
cats and dogs indecisive
slinking for cover.
Collars like funnels
a weeping of spectacles
seeping of shoes
all told the story.
Cars with pallid exhausts made avenues,
trees held their breath,
rodents hunched in reluctant skins.
Suddenly then a door clicked
an inward thrust to a haven of hissing coffee
backs of chairs overwhelmed by coats
talk of more rain.
raypool
Sun 8th Nov 2020 19:07
Thank you Brian for liking this - I enjoyed reliving it!
Every poem should have a happy ending Graham, thanks for your thoughts.
Very kind Jennifer. Glad it worked for you.
Ray