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Penny For The Guy

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Bonfire night in lockdown
just a bit different this year
No gathering around the fire
or stray bangers sparking fear

No spinning Catherine wheels
or rockets aiming for the sky
No fountain shower of sparks
or Roman candles shooting high

No potato pie and pea supper
no parkin cake or treacle sweets
No black peas in a plastic cup
no neighbours to meet and greet

Some of us may still celebrate 
and make it a night to remember
Salute the failings of Guy Fawkes 
as usual on the fifth of November

Lockdown may spoil our fun
but we can all still remember
The Bonfire nights of the past
on every fifth of November

Remember the cold night air 
wrapped up warm and cosy 
Excited, bright eyed children 
smiling faces and cheeks rosy

Names written in loopy glows
quick, before the sparkler dies
The magical firework display
exploding across moonlit skies

A flashing frenzy of colour
lighting up the blackest sky
A shower of shooting stars
trailing rockets soaring high

Bonfire Night in lockdown
will be a let down for many
Always try to find a positive...
at least we all saved a penny

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◄ Hygge

The Brink Of A PandeMINK ►

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julie callaghan

Fri 6th Nov 2020 16:02

Thanks for the lovely comment Nicola, sounds like you had a great time. X

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julie callaghan

Fri 6th Nov 2020 16:00

Thanks for the comment and like MC and to John for the like.

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Fri 6th Nov 2020 15:59

Lovely poem.
We did sparklers
Had toffee apples
And treacle toffee.
And watched all the fireworks going off in the sky.
. We couldn't go to the organised display like we normally do and all the fairground rides but we made the most of it

Find a positive.
In every darkness
Reach for the light
And pray that tomorrow brings
A brighter day


Xx blessings Julie

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 6th Nov 2020 15:49

We can always think of this "suspended" Guy Fawkes night as an
allegory of the man himself being caught in the act and suspended
from carrying out his planned attack. We are merely on the rack of disappointment, unlike the man himself. ?

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julie callaghan

Fri 6th Nov 2020 11:17

Aww, I know Hugh, we used to make our black lab a den under the stairs. I personally think fireworks should be banned apart from professional displays. Let’s hope there’s no more for a while. Lots of fireworks here too. Hope your dog is a lot happier today. Thanks for the like.

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Hugh

Fri 6th Nov 2020 09:58

Lots of bangs and flashes round here,
My dog was curled up at my feet in fear.

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 19:07

Thanks also to Shifa and Rose for the likes

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 17:57

Thank for the likes and great comments Stephen and Paul from behind the mask.

Thanks also Stephen and Hugh for the likes.

Hope you have fun and keep safe.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 5th Nov 2020 17:24

You're on fire with your poetry this week Julie ?
Another goodun ?

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