LOCKDOWN FUNERAL
After the cremation service the fresh air.
"I never forget a mask,"
I said to someone i'd never met,
an attempt at grim humour.
The embarrassing marquee behind us
pallbearers upright in their black masks,
so long in the waiting.
Truth is I had felt disconnected
but grief can spread like ripples
from a stone cast into water
at the downcast head of one
I knew so well
burdened then bereaved,
at the bravery of reading the eulogy to Patsy his wife
fifty six years wed.
raypool
Wed 2nd Dec 2020 22:28
Thanks Brian. You're welcome. Funny how a line can just come to you .A quite recent event.
Very kind, Candice.
Graham, yes we are so reliant on our other halves and dread separation. Thanks for reading.
Greg, my first public reading was at my father in law's funeral. I must admit to a sort of guilt at offering my poems to others since ; the feedback is always good for the soul though.
Thank you Paul. I try to edit and strip poems down now, and find that can be a good discipline.
Stephen, i'm glad you found it so. I like to find that point where readers can react in that way.
For the likes thanks Trevor, Branwell, Julie, Stephen, Aisha and J.D.