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Plotting a course

Dear infant Grandson.

If from this world, Grandpa does depart.

Before you have mastered our language too an art.

My dreams, my desires, were to prepare you for this world.

I wanted to show you my maps.

And teach you how to read my collection of charts.

I believe you are my reason for being here. 

Right from the very start.

I want to be your navigator, your ship-shape crew.

That is what I thought would be my part.

Your Father, my Son, is a great man.

To follow in his footsteps, would be a good start.

Your Father followed in my footsteps. 

That is how you got here.

You cute little fart.

(I love you)

 

By JD Bardo

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J.D. Bardo

Fri 4th Dec 2020 10:09

Thank-you everyone for reading, thank-you for the likes, and nice comments.

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 2nd Dec 2020 16:57

Thank-you so much for the comments and likes, it means so much to me, Thanks again

JD B

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keith jeffries

Wed 2nd Dec 2020 07:11

A poem which is a plea for continuity of life. Full of pride and love for the newcomer. Wishes for this offspring to do well. The last line is a crusher but so down to earth. Another clean nappy please. This poem is full of love. It speaks of such.

Good poem
Thank you for this
Keith

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 1st Dec 2020 14:49

thank-you Ghazala, I hope the little guy is the best of me, then whatever he wants to be,

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Ghazala lari

Tue 1st Dec 2020 14:44

Like father like son
No difference
Only dates change
Fate remains same
Awesome little f.r.?

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