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A chip off the old block

My name is JD.

I am of my fathers seed.

If you knew the man.

You would agree he was a special breed.

Because of him.

I grew to be a man with great speed.

When I am cut, it is his blood that I bleed.

When times were good,  Father was in the lead.

When times were bad,  it was Father that I need.

If I wanted something,  he helped with little greed.

Fathers advice was wise,  his words you would heed.

Father was a controling man,  his desires,  you had to feed.

Until I became my own man,  and I was freed.

I praise him now,  but he was not always doing a good deed.

To much like him I am,  I must concede.

After all, I am of my fathers seed.

 

By JD Bardo

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J.D. Bardo

Thu 17th Dec 2020 09:11

Thank-you Hugh, and Aviva, for the comments. and to all hitting the like. thank-you also. JD.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 15th Dec 2020 09:03

With Hugh and you I am agreed,
It is certainly a very good read.

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Hugh

Tue 15th Dec 2020 07:21

Fun poems like this we need,
I laughed so much ,nearly weed.

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