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Tossed Salad

Shredded Dignity, Diced Words.
Chopped Emotions, Grated Nerves.

These are our salad days.
 

 

By: Aviva Rifka Bhandari

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meditationshort poempath of life

◄ Finding Peace

Nothing Greater Than Life ►

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Feb 2021 00:52

Thank you Trevor for your comment ?

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trevor homer

Sun 20th Dec 2020 15:19

13 words that contain as much insight as a whole world of words - quite a feast.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 18th Dec 2020 17:07

Thank you both, Stephen Atkinson and Vautaw for your comments.
Thanks also to those who clicked the 'like' button for this poem.

I often let myself use lots and lots of words to say not much, but in this one I somehow managed to use not many words to say lots and lots - not something I often know how to do!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 18th Dec 2020 13:57

Clever play on words Aviva! ❤️

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 18th Dec 2020 12:26

A succinctly tasty, little salad

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