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FOUR STEPS TO HEAVEN

I'm whoozie for a floozie,

can't afford to be choosie.

While i'm boozie

i'll go for Suzie. 

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◄ PHILIPE PETTIT HIGH WIRE ARTIST

CHRISTMAS MOON ►

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:14

Another comment missed sorry Jennifer. Thanks for the idea.

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Wed 27th Jan 2021 16:29

Nice one Ray! Agree it sounds like jazz lyrics.

Jennifer

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raypool

Wed 23rd Dec 2020 20:00

Thank you all John, Tony, Paul, Stephen, Julie, Stephen and JD Bardo for liking this.

Yes Graham, Just a rehearsal for the big day!

I'm in trouble Brian - and counting.....

Nice idea Martin. Maybe the Temperance Seven to perform it with a megaphone i'm thinking. That dates me!

Happy Xmas everyone!

Ray

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Martin Elder

Mon 21st Dec 2020 21:11

This sounds like the lyrics to an old jazz standard. Perhaps from the swing era.
Nice one Ray

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 21st Dec 2020 15:27

Is that you Don? Jumped into Ray's skin.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 21st Dec 2020 13:30

Good to see you've begun the festivities early Ray!

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