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Under the Bridge

We all know of one

A rusty old train trestle

Or a highway,  maybe an old street

A bridge,  going from ridge to ridge

Underneath,

The secret place where as young boys we would meet

Having adventures,  climbing and playing

And telling stories that could not be beat

One day,  imagine what would cross my mind

When a stack of old 70`s porno mag`s we did find

Showing private parts of every kind

The other boys,  testing what side of the bridge I stand on

Asked me,  when I look at these pictures,  what do I see?

I had to keep it a secret,  but it is all beautiful to me

Images of our nude bodies is a work of art

Equally interesting to me, right from the very start

And I believe my curiosity was shared by the other boys

About these private things,  they are not going to make much noise

But we all played on both sides of the bridge

Before conforming to our prospective ridge

As for me,  I am often caught up in the middle

Making my emotional condition quite brittle

When you think of me out here be very kind

And,  I ask you to keep an open mind

Before you call me names,  or think I am queer

You also have played out here,  in the middle,  that is clear

When you thought your secret was hidden

You said and did all those things that were forbidden

Under the Bridge

 

By JD. Bardo

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Emeka Collins

Wed 30th Dec 2020 18:57

I would always make out time to publish and read other great poets here. Thank you for your kinds words J.D. Bardo

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 30th Dec 2020 10:14

thank-you for the likes, Julie, Aisha, and Aviva, always happy that you are reading. thank-you for the comments Keith and Emeka, I never know what to say on my return comments, I lack the confidence and courage to say what i want, and should say. I do want to say to you Emeka, I respect your opinions very much, I feel you are a great poet. I learn from you, and admire your work. I was very impressed, and love the poem of yours (Walking Tender Paths). I am happy to see you came online and visited with us. come back often, we miss you. JD.

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keith jeffries

Wed 30th Dec 2020 09:07

Emeka, welcome to your new admirer! Your comment is of a mature nature as poets should be prepared to deal with awkward issues. We are often the voice of dissent.
Keith

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Emeka Collins

Tue 29th Dec 2020 22:30

Images of our nude bodies is a work of art...

Great words...

A sensitive topic many shy away from...A poet always summons the courage to venture into the untrod.

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keith jeffries

Tue 29th Dec 2020 17:53

JD.,

With this poem you have excelled yourself not only with its style but the manner in which you have dealt with a very sensitive subject and as you so rightly say, it can expose not only sexual ambivalence but a past which many would rather either forget or will not acknowledge.

It is well rhymed and has a touch of boyish humour as we all went through that period of self exploration. It is also courageous as you too acknowledge your orientation. Your honesty in these lines is exhilarating.

A poem worthy of submission into a poetry competition, where I am sure an accolade would be awarded.

Thank you indeed for this

Keith

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