The man that thought to
Write down words that sound profound
Became a poet
Blessed be the Mother
Giving up her life for child
Sacrafice honored
Addicted to sex
When my Babysitter asked
Want to play naked?
(these three will do for now)
By J.D. Bardo
Aviva, that leaves me waiting for the words in anticipation !!
Great job, Post some more please
I preferred the first of these but they are all good.
And yes, I do have some too, not precisely senryu but sort of.
Here's an example so you can see what I mean, not quite on topic to be senryu but...
Relentlessly dragged
from their peaceful slumbering;
a handful of words.
Thank-you Aviva, Have any of these yourself?
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Brian Hodgkinson
Mon 8th Feb 2021 02:57
Aviva, that is actually a very good senryu -- it can be less than 7-5-7, but not more. And the expression was powerful.