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Sailing

Gentle breeze blowing

Across undulating seas

Full sails take me home

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 21st Feb 2021 14:47

Unfortunate about the unintentional pun, but this has a lot of depth to it. In particular I find of interest that 'home' could be seen as whatever you think of as your 'home', or otherwise the 'home' that is fated for you to arrive at.

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