Beloved
As children they grew up together,
Bonded by friendship so deep
The passage to love was marked
By effortless consummation.
Their love was godly.
Fate forged shackles with no key.
But families fractured;
Communities convulsed;
Countries disintegrated.
Upon great tables in small rooms
Politics scissored flags – land – people -
And stitched up new nations.
The flags flapped smartly as flags must do.
The sodden land sighed darkly.
The people reacted madly and fought fiercely,
Unsure where bonds of brotherhood drew the line -
If bonds of brotherhood could draw a line.
The strong bones of tradition crumbled,
Scuttled into shallow graves,
Prey to the dogs of war and the wolves of commerce.
The people were manic, their hearts unhinged.
In blind aggression they surged against each other,
And counted not who was the foe.
Weapons cracked, bombs exploded, knives flashed,
Flooding steamy pools of blood
In busy markets and hothouse hotels,
Through dancing streets and crowded queues,
In restless bedrooms and tousled cribs -
Everywhere.
Vengeance was the only balm.
And then, one day, as people ran like rats,
With fate’s brutal clarity
Two contorted faces faltered,
Glazed eyes blazing into recognition.
The frantic crowd dissolved to nothing
As the lovers fell upon each other’s breast.
Around them bodies swarmed, and screamed,
And crushed them - in a locked embrace,
Their lips tasting only deathless joy,
Their eyes seeing only the last exultant look
Of the Beloved.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
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Sun 11th Jul 2010 23:15
Hi Cynthia. Thanks for sharing this poem. I love that the reader knows in the very first stanza that this will not be a happy story ("Fate forged shackles with no key.")and the whole thing reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, where you also know in the first few lines that the story ends in death. You set the scene beautifully all the way through the poem right through 'til the bitter end. Would be interested to read the first version! Look forward to reading more. Dianna.