First Light
thorn rose in quicksand
a pale siren lost at sea
gurgling a hymn, that's
what she means to me
she's saying little of late
quieter now than of yore
time's calmed her down
once I called her a whore
came home at all hours
partied till she dropped
spent money like water
manic how she shopped
once a nymphomaniac
in bed she wore me out
I was not the only one
she'd bed many a lout
yet with saving graces
love swam in her eyes
mistress in the kitchen
no cook beat her pies
when my sight failed
she was my minder
led me through town
no need to bind her
brought up our kids
took them to church
helpless I was, didn't
drop me in the lurch
fought like a tigress
we cried at her bed
still a mystery how
her life-force is dead
ashes on the mantel
blind now but nearer
strange as it seems
now I see her clearer
jennifer Malden
Wed 12th May 2021 11:33
Really liked this one! This is genuine love from both sides. 'thorn rose in quicksand' so well describes the two sides of her. It is true also, in my experience anyway, that you often perceive a person you were close to more objectively and sensitively when they have gone.
Great writing.
Jennifer