Cliches
Clichés
Naked
She lay on the ivory carpet,
Stretched out,
Her head propped on one arm.
Deliberately
She circled the crystal rim
With her finger tip,
And dipped her tongue
Into the ruby wine,
Smiling mischievously
At the man seated on the sofa.
The red liquid glowed
In the single lamplight;
Her thighs gleamed golden
On the creamy rug.
‘You look so right there,’ he said,
‘As if you couldn’t be anywhere else.’
The half-whispered cliché
So matched the moment
That her fingers fumbled on
The thin stem of the glass
And the crimson wine tipped over
Spreading like blood
On the spotless carpet.
‘Oh, Christ!’ he yelped,
Diving for tissues and grabbing
A bottle of tonic off the sideboard.
Together they mopped frantically,
Squelching the carbonated ale
Into the deep red stain
Until – finally -
The mark was just faintly pink.
‘I am so sorry,’
She managed at last to gasp.
‘That was so clumsy of me.
Will you need to bring in a
Professional cleaner?’
‘No, no, it will be fine.’
He pitched the papers into the bin
And sat again on the couch.
She dressed herself quickly,
Avoiding the big spot on the floor:
It was wet.
They shrugged and laughed,
A conscious silly sound.
And yet, the previous moment
Did not become comedic.
It existed separately as a truth
That could not be diminished.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Pete Crompton
Fri 24th Sep 2010 10:37
"And yet, the previous moment
Did not become comedic. Well captured in words here Cynthia.
I like the way you have put the fact 'she looks so right there' like she is part of the sculpture of the wine glass stem.
reminds of a song lyric sung by Steve Hogarth
" theres a heart on her sleeve from a spill of red wine"
It existed separately as a truth
That could not be diminished"
a poem within a poem. There is something about this situation, this spilling wine situation,