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Another prompt invokes an undesired surge
of thought and fractured scenes,
requiring energy to sort and draw conclusions,
prior to recording in the journal for today.

Time to him resembles auctioning a gem,
the longer it lasts, the higher its price,
and he's approaching life's end zone called "red,"
where actuaries hold their breath and count.

The formalist stands firm on well-packed ground,
an old foundation made by friends he never met,
encouraging the weak to raise the flag
and charge ahead with valor to the goal.

It matters not that no one knows or even cares,
about responses he designs. All that matters
is the value of his time--remaining time,
that shrinks with subtle steady beat.

But his eclectic poetry is filtered wisdom,
sifted by tight strands of cynic's views,
supporting neo-phrases with a twist,
that modern judges rule as harsh and out of place.
 

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gerald greene

Wed 30th Jun 2021 18:13

Is this the correct way to respond to a comment? I'm new here and am not sure.

Yes, all judges differ, and matching poetry to audience and judge is no simple task.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 30th Jun 2021 14:24

All competitions are subjective in their outcome. Those judging
them are essentially seeking what they themselves look for or
prefer to see as "poetry". One might see them in a literary
sense as "the lottery of strife". Putting a contentious topic into
words in the way shown here is itself a style of form and content
and does its job well (subjectively speaking, of course). ?.

<Deleted User> (29145)

Wed 30th Jun 2021 12:30

Hello and welcome Gerald. Thank you for posting your wonderful writings on this site. They are of such an amazing, delightful and inspirational quality.

Leon

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