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AT 68 ( FOR DEBORAH )

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AT 68 (FOR DEBORAH)

Older than rain falling from winter sky

Older than light breaking-open the darkness

Older than speck of birds shadowing distant mountains

Yes, older than the first-born star, older than all of this

The biology of eternity is embedded in our skin,

Blood to blood, clan to kin, a tiny grain of time within.

 

Oh, how we danced soul to soul, skin to skin

Across the escarpment of years, we found each other

In all our joy and suffering, in all our fervor and beauty

Singing from the very depths of our aliveness

Crossing the borders into the endless country of the heart

Ageless in the blaze of love burning through our days.

© AT 68. Blue Pearl Music 2021. Terry McArthur.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 24th Jul 2021 18:31

The whole is a lovely poem for Deborah, but embedded within it is this segment which is (literally) universal, and could be a stand-alone poem.

0lder than the first-born star, older than all of this
The biology of eternity is embedded in our skin,
Blood to blood, clan to kin, a tiny grain of time within.

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raypool

Mon 19th Jul 2021 15:19

This is a real pearl - it made me read on and absorb it without any faultlines. It manages to avoid over sentimentality by being open and truthful, a hard act to achieve, and there is no bitterness to it, another good thing!

Ray

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