In Darker Days We Gather
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 1st Aug 2010 00:15
Good morning Dave-brill poem,but would you mind if I put my two pennyworth into the last verse?
'in these darker days we gather,
left here to recall
legacies of having known true
hearts
whose good deeds were never small'
if you prefer to bite my head off,
take yer teeth out first! lol!
catch thi' later owd' son-Stef.
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Dave D Poet Rhumour
Sun 1st Aug 2010 19:19
Well I have now tweaked the third line of that last stanza Stefan, maybe it is a little easier on the tongue - especially as I removed the 'deliberate (lol) mistake' :)