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A Certain Lady

 

There's a certain wistful aspect to her gentle grace

A fair haired lovely with elegance embedded in her face

Clear eyed and full lipped with cheekbones well defined

And just to top that outer view is the beauty of her mind


Such a combination must be more than many men can bear

So much for them to live up to - may they hope they can ensnare

A lady filled with passions that are reserved just for that one

Who offers safety for her heart and can carry her along


With them hand in hand till the night is never gone

Amid the certain knowledge that they will ever look upon

A sight that others cannot as her views are just for him

The truth is that within their bond there never will be sin


For sin is just for other souls that have yet come to learn

Without deep trust and honesty they just cannot discern

The reality of true love is we hold the other high

In every way above ourselves and without the need to ply


Our troth with false pretences in the hope that they might sway

The other's will towards us without a momentary delay

For time is well invested only when all is sincere

Then we will have earned the right to call the other dear 


©Rhumour

March 7th 2009


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Ann Foxglove

Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:36

Lovely poem Dave. xx

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 22:30

Good evening Dave-you read this with just the right depth of voice-and as Heather mentions,very well ended-Thank you Sir!-Stef.

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Heather

Sat 31st Jul 2010 17:18

I love the rhythm of this piece, you've got it spot on and the content's just great. Very charming. I felt that you ended it very well.

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Lynn Dye

Fri 30th Jul 2010 22:09

Just lovely, Dave, and your voice is perfect too.

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Bernadette Herbertson

Fri 30th Jul 2010 00:13

lovely poem ..bernadette herbertson

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:47

Dear Dave! It's not my kindness, it's your greatness.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:38

Thanks my friend - you are very kind :) I've sent that one to Michelle to use on her radio show hopefully :)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 29th Jul 2010 21:35

Your voice is fantastic. And... your poem is beautiful. I've never heard anything better. With warmest wishes,Laura.xxx

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