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Encirclement

Encirclement

 

No visible or discernible change

of an old familiar landscape

Shapes and scenes the same

spires, stiles and hedgerows

Winding rivers with swans and ducks

bridges over which to peer 

On rusted tracks once filled

with steam and whistles

New sounds bring new echoes

reverberating engines

Aeroplanes, fly high and low

calls are unfamiliar and invasive

Shadowy intruders with

tongues, new and foreign

We withdraw as do rabbits

into our labyrinth of warrens

Two aggressors encircle the land

one to kill the other to diminish us

They work in tandem against

our fortress once thought impregnable

Now vulnerable and laid bare

We no longer amble or walk

but scurry to be kept safe

The battle has its own victory

as we await an ignominious

defeat

 

🌷(7)

◄ An Illusion

The Conundrum of Life ►

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keith jeffries

Sun 12th Dec 2021 00:05

Thank you to all who commented and liked this poem. Your appreciation and words are most gratifying.
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 10th Dec 2021 14:47

I'm sure there are thoughts along these lines currently existing
in the UK. Too much, too soon is invariably a recipe for unrest
and uncertainty. Time alone can offer hope for better things
to occur across the spectrum of life and expectation.

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John Botterill

Thu 9th Dec 2021 22:45

This poem is tense and foreboding, Keith, with striking, powerful imagery. Viviv. Loved it!
John Botterill

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