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Presence

Try to grasp at gardenias

and not at straws, 

imbue empiricism with

a splash of lyricism, 

let a leap of language

be a leap of faith

to ward off the wraith

of passivity, and maybe

welcome the sublimity

afforded by a truly 

Present Tense, one

that puts up a fight

against the callousness

of All-Taming Time...

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Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Tue 28th Dec 2021 00:39

Thank you very much, Brenda, I really appreciate the kind words! 😊

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Brenda Wells

Mon 27th Dec 2021 13:08

Beautifully written. I love the notion expressed in seeking to grasp at gardenias, not straws such a positive image.
Thank you

Holden Moncrieff

Sun 26th Dec 2021 14:16

Thank you so much for the kind comment, John, it really means a lot! 😊

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John Botterill

Sun 26th Dec 2021 09:39

Witty and profound. Thank you, Holden. A poem to treasure. 😊

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