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STRANGE MUSIC

It was said by some that the church organ

played of its own accord

behind locked doors with no one inside

to do the playing,

but that was when a hesitant wind

sprang across the stubbles of wheat

stretched the branches of trees to harps

and the leaves of hedges with a - rustling

like an ordinance. 

 

Suffolk byways keep their secrets well

and backs are turned against such a wind

seeking homes with their known tunes

of logs burning to ward off the unwelcome

in furrows and trenches

where they travel as only they can know. 

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raypool

Sun 2nd Jan 2022 14:34

Thanks Brenda for the like !

Very kind Tom thanks. I drove to the place I had in mind coming back from a music gig at an early hour, and the sensations were palpable.

Ray

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Tom

Sun 2nd Jan 2022 11:33

This one feels steeped in atmosphere. Masterful and hauntingly wintry.

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raypool

Thu 30th Dec 2021 22:30

Thanks for reading Stephen, it is rather strange to have two adjacent about Suffolk, but that's quite ok by me! I moved the first line from the body of the poem to catch the attention as it were. Greg advised to start off with a favourite line, so I tend to use that!

Quintessentially English thought Graham, thank you for the observation.

Greg, interestingly as with your coincidence I have an 80s book of some of his stories. They're not all in there. I'd love to get hold of the ones I havn't read, it's a tricky one . I love the comparison. The inspiration for this poem was Borley Rectory,
the subject of several books I acquired.

Thanks for the likes, John, Kishore, Stephen, Holden and Jimakos

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Wed 29th Dec 2021 09:03

A brilliant poem, Ray, conjuring up MR James. By coincidence, I was given his collected ghost stories for Christmas.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 29th Dec 2021 06:53

Can’t think why I’m humming Vaughan Williams reading this through.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 28th Dec 2021 21:31

I love the atmosphere of this, Ray. By coincidence, I'm about to post a poem about music in Suffolk. Where else?

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