Waiting for our Mum
I saw you waiting
in the light
stood there waiting
standing there
saw you in
the window's light
standing facing
to the light
from the windows
tall and bright
from the shopping
arcade's light
from the arcade's
neon glare
I saw you shopping
standing there
I saw you standing
shopping there
saw you with the
shopping there
In the arcade windows glare
stood there standing
unaware
stood there standing
chestnut hair
watched by shoppers
stood to stare
bathed within the
window's light
before the windows
tall and bright
in the light just
standing there
you stood waiting
we stood there
all of us stood
standing there
I stood waiting
with my sisters there
we all smiled
as mum stood there
she waved to us
as we waved to her.
(brief memory aged 3.
Mum died in 1958. Sisters Mally 5 and Tina 9 months)
words and foto T Carroll
reworked
Tommy Carroll
Wed 26th Jan 2022 11:52
Thanks John, I appreciate your response to the verse.
tc