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sea GIrL

Gone in a whisper,as summer breeze washes

Your locks ,flowing hair streaming as if the wind is your own.

Untamed by your laughter and smiles,

Tossing your head in animal mane

The world is yours , with hordes at your feet,

Conquering all hearts that lay before you.

 

Dancing down the sands into the surf, 

Sylthen body glistening in the foam,

Rising like the mermaids of legend 

Goddesses of the mind,

Saviours of lost souls,

Holders of the universe

 

Lying back on the green,

Fresh meadow of flowers,draping your body

Tousled hair thrown back like a cloak

That beckons me to your Siren form,

Eyes that gaze up to the blue

Drinking in my touch, to quench your longing

 

Satiated in the embers of your eyes

Quivering at the sound of your sighs 

Spent before you I lay my hands

On Snow White skin that takes the mist

That clouds my sight, and leaves me to go clear

To the bridge that hides the key.

 

 15/01/2022. 20:005-21-17

 

 

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sun 16th Jan 2022 17:53

Thanks very much for your kind and encouraging comments. I’m pleased you all like it

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 16th Jan 2022 15:33

Great poem, Pete.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 16th Jan 2022 12:10

A beautifully composed piece of writing 🌈

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Sun 16th Jan 2022 11:02

And I totally agree with all that Keith has said.

A lovely piece of work.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 15th Jan 2022 23:33

Thanks Keith.that’s praise indeed !

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keith jeffries

Sat 15th Jan 2022 23:15

A poem rich in sensuality coupled fine erotic imagery which cannot but fail to entrance the reader, even a gay soul like me.
Beautifully composed.
Thank you for this
Keith

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