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Narratives

To parse sentences strung

together for effect, 

it might be discovered

that the Ideal is described,

even as one is compelled

to expound upon its dearth. 

 

A way of playing pretend 

at omniscience, with 

a 'voice of God' narration,

though the jig might

well be up when 

there's no one at hand

to give the peroration. 

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Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Sun 23rd Jan 2022 03:18

Thank you so much, John and Pete, I'm deeply grateful for your encouraging comments! 😊

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 22nd Jan 2022 23:39

Holden , love your stuff, (but being a bit thick I always have to reach for a dictionary )

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John Botterill

Sat 22nd Jan 2022 22:25

Really enjoyed this , Holden. I suppose we all live narratives where nobody knows how the story will conclude. You really extend my thinking. Thank you!

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