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A cracking poem, Tommy. Loved the word play !
I did indeed do it Kš
Cheers Stephen š
High praise from you both.
The last four lines are brilliant, Tommy.
Tommy,
This is cleverly put together and it really held my interest. As I read it I equated to my own feelings and experience of life. Good illustration. Did you do it?
Thanks for this
Keith
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Tommy Carroll
Mon 24th Jan 2022 15:41
Cheers JBšš