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After the nearly before

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Before the after
 
I'm now nearly bald
once considered shorn,
like now nearly dead
not being un-born.
I used to be young
but now I'm not old,
like being informed
not being untold.
 
I used to be slight
but now I'm substantial,
like being skint
then becoming financial.
 
Words and image by Tommy Carroll
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ā—„ "Taking the knee"?

Time to decide ā–ŗ

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 24th Jan 2022 15:41

Cheers JBšŸ‘šŸ˜Š

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John Botterill

Mon 24th Jan 2022 11:35

A cracking poem, Tommy. Loved the word play !

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 24th Jan 2022 11:12

I did indeed do it KšŸ˜Ž
Cheers Stephen šŸ™‚
High praise from you both.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Jan 2022 21:55

The last four lines are brilliant, Tommy.

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keith jeffries

Sat 22nd Jan 2022 17:37

Tommy,
This is cleverly put together and it really held my interest. As I read it I equated to my own feelings and experience of life. Good illustration. Did you do it?
Thanks for this
Keith

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