BROTHERS
We arrive in Dolgelley
the sun still rides the late peaks
and our day will soon be over.
We ascend to the top floor
of a grey terrace pub
with its utility wardrobe whose door
cannot be closed.
A late light informs the lace curtains
with its bleak projection.
My brother's saddlebag has landed on the floor;
soon he will light a disgusting Falcon pipe,
make notes of the ride,
cycling stories of aching legs
proof shared between ourselves:
tonight a stone sink portraying its age with stains
the glandular hiss of water
ascending from the depths
tepid, uninviting.
No teas or coffees in the room
but we make the bar in time
for shepherd's pie from a packet.
The night dreams of itself
is pleased with the stillness
of the town asleep
with traditions we can only sense.
Tomorrow the long climb awaits.
raypool
Tue 25th Jan 2022 17:37
Many thanks for all you likers (too many to name if you don't mind).
Thank you Graham. I was trying to paint in the details I saw in my mind . Just a few ingredients really but I appreciate your close reading. Excellent.
Keith, the poem was set in the eighties believe it or not, but Wales was a bit tardy in the coming up to date department at that time. Not sure about the curtains....
Thanks Mark for your remarks. While the idea of allied mags is a lovely one, there was an air of indifference and slight hostility as I remember. I did do Devon on a 3speed Sturmey Archer hub gear, but derailleurs this time ( only 10 speed).
Thank you Stephen, and Stephen. So glad you approved
Ray