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FLANNEL WHITE

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FLANNEL WHITE

My father's journey through life

from school to war to office

was just a sequence of obedience

while others did the thinking.

 

No sooner home from work

than meal finished, off to play.

Sundays at the cricket crease

the only place he wished to be.

 

A catalogue of parks and pitches

we were driven to on sufferance,

mum to make tea and sandwiches

in pavilions with other wives;

 

me enduring vistas of boredom

for a ritual as slow as chess.

But when I notice coloured kit

these days on television screens

 

I remember lazy afternoons

of flannel white and flying cork,

striped deckchairs, summer sun,

long silences exploding into action.

 

Pulsar Poetry, 2020, Ed David Pike.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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john short

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 21:53

Thanks guys for all your kind comments. To answer your question Greg he described himself as the anchor man, holding the line. Far too cautious to swing for sixes. He was also the captain of Ormskirk Saint Anne's table tennis team, who were top of the Southport League (Division One) for many years.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 17:01

This is a lovely poem of memory and nostalgia, John. Village cricket has its explosive moments, not to mention simmering resentment and grudges. Just like life, I suppose. Really enjoyed this - thanks.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 14:31

Sport - the great leveller.
Cricket - the home of grace and pace.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 12:49

'Long silences exploding into action' ... key line! Was he a batsman or a bowler? Maybe an all-rounder?

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 11:56

owZat!
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