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A Stale Wind

 

What am I but air

Another breath

In an increasingly breathless world

Another sigh

In a whirlwind of exasperation 

Unheard against the halitosis 

of  political exhaling 

Dissipating under the hot breath

of false rhetoric 

And hot-air promises 

Soon to blow away 

Like the weary farts 

Of a backbench octogenarian 

Politiciansbullshit

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Sat 19th Feb 2022 04:21

Love this one! Thank you for sharing! 😁

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 6th Feb 2022 15:15

Thank you for commenting & liking my audible sigh of ill political winds 😤

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julie callaghan

Fri 4th Feb 2022 17:59

There is a lot of huffing and puffing going on. Just wonder who or what will finally blow the house down😁

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 4th Feb 2022 12:01

It is the use of content that imbues this politically flavoured
message with such panache. .

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Martin Elder

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 22:33

I love your use of words in this piece Stephen. Halitosis is such a great metaphor

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 21:27

😂 thank you, John for your like & always valued literery wisdom!

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John Marks

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 21:18

More monosyllables. Fewer present participles. "A political exhale dissipates into hot air."

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