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Silence

To really come to know a place,

 You must first understand its silence. 

During the grey hours. 

 

A cathedral at dusk, 

 A temple at dawn. 

 

An ancient hotel before

 The throngs descend. 

 

A mountain you climb to the top, 

 And then forget to fly off. 

 

A pier that draws you near. 

 

What you realize is, 

 The silence isn't real. 

The murmurs of prior lives deafen, 

 The quiet devoured. 

During the grey hours.  

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Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 10th Feb 2022 03:18

Thank you so much for your kind comments, Stephen and John, they are always appreciated! 😊

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John Botterill

Wed 9th Feb 2022 22:30

I love the concept of

'The murmur of prior lives'

I believe I have felt this in several places now that your poem has drawn my attention to it.
Thank you, Holden.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 9th Feb 2022 21:05

Thank you, Holden. 'The grey hours' is a wonderful notion.

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