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SEWER CONVERSION

A sewage worker was born again

finding Jesus down the drain

a moment of light and truth of sorts

where the underworld contorts.

 

Breathing methane was the cause

yet still an event to give us pause

he underwent a strange conversion

after seeing the browning version.

 

As above so below

where even common faecal flow

can bring a man to God it seems

who specializes in such extremes.

 

(The Browning Version:  a play by Terence Rattigan

unconnected with the poem except by rhyming allusion)

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◄ THE GARDENER'S DILEMMA

ON MOTHERS' DAY ►

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raypool

Fri 25th Mar 2022 20:14

Thanks so much John, Rudyard, Aviv, Holden and Russell for your likes.

Greg, agreed!
Thanks a lot Martin.
Haha Stephen, wow.
They do make uneasy bedfellows Stephen A.
Love that John, self evident I know but still made me chortle. I did post this on facebook!

Ray

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John Marks

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 00:39

Thought I'd read this somewhere before. Facebook. Good as gold Ray. Once knew a guy who worked on a sewage farm. Always got served first in the pub.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:35

Poetic toilet humour at its finest 😄💩

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:10

Great one, Ray. The browning version is priceless, if not odourless.

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:57

Fabulous Ray. I love it

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Greg Freeman

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 08:03

Extraordinary, Ray!

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