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Forever Young

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GRANDPA IS MY BESTIE

Is emblazoned across this shirt

Which you used to own.

It looks so tiny in my hands!

A visual manifestation

Of how incredibly tall you have grown

In such a very short time!

It makes me sad, yet happy,

To see it lying there.

A token of the special bond

We shared.

 

And share still.

Time has moved on, Will,

Your shirts are double that size.

No. Treble!

Your world has expanded

Exponentially

And so, it must.

Now you correct my

Vocabulary and call me

“Clever lad!”

(Impudent child!)

 

But we can both remember

 That special time,

When you were so small that you

Nestled into the crook of my elbow,

As I marched you off to sleep.

(I couldn’t do that now!)

When grandad was the bestie

With whom young shared your games

And who shared his biscuits with you!

 

When there was always a new song

To be learnt and to be sung!

 

William and his bestie,

 

Forever young!

 

 

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 3rd Apr 2022 17:12

Very kind of you to say so, John, although I should update my photo soon!

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John Botterill

Sun 3rd Apr 2022 11:21

Thanks Rasa. What a lovely comment! 😀

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Rasa Kabaila

Sun 3rd Apr 2022 09:24

Beautiful John. So heartfelt. 💗

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John Botterill

Fri 1st Apr 2022 12:54

Thanks, Holden, for the wonderful comments. Your appreciation means a lot to me 😃

Holden Moncrieff

Fri 1st Apr 2022 03:27

An amazing poem, John, it wonderfully captures the bond with your grandson, as well as the passage of time! 😊

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John Botterill

Thu 31st Mar 2022 19:26

Thanks Ursula and Stephen G. Typically generous comments from you both!😀
Stephen, A 44 year old niece. You're not old enough, surely?! 😀

Thanks for the like Julie.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 31st Mar 2022 18:12

A very moving, yet joyous poem, John. Yes, time moves on...

I remember seeing my niece in Liverpool Hospital the day she was born. She has just turned 44!

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Thu 31st Mar 2022 17:30

A precious poem for your grandson, just lovely, John!🎈🌷

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John Botterill

Thu 31st Mar 2022 13:57

Thanks so much Russell. Lovely comments. 😊

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 31st Mar 2022 13:04

I have the same relationship with my 11-year-old grandson, they are precious, whether nestled in the crook of your elbow or on the same sofa eating your biscuits.
lovely sentiments, I enjoyed that.

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