Retirement Time Crush
(The challenge, set by Rasa Kabaila, was to write a poem with the word “crush” within it. It was supposed to be a 10-line poem but I always write too much!)
Mention ‘retirement’ to the working poor,
And they will swear and go purple in the face!
"What lounging around watching day-time TV?"
I must tell them, sternly, this is not the case!
We are within a remorseless crusher
Between two lovely, nonogenarian mothers
And a darling cherub, who is growing wiser,
Whilst performing on a new stage every day!
Everyone knows we have our ‘retirement time.’
“Of course, you can do it!” What can we say?
“Yes, we can help you, but it will be a crush!”
No wonder our brains are now going to mush.
John Botterill
Sat 9th Apr 2022 20:52
Thanks Kj and Rasa., for your positive responses.
I wouldn't go so far as to say I wish I was working again, Kj. Definitely not!
I think your idea for poetic challenges is a great one, Rasa. Count me in! 😀
It would be fascinating to see what our poetic friends do with the same stimuli 😁