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Retirement Time Crush

(The challenge, set by Rasa Kabaila, was to write a poem with the word “crush” within it.  It was supposed to be a 10-line poem but I always write too much!)

 

Mention ‘retirement’ to the working poor,

And they will swear and go purple in the face!

"What lounging around watching day-time TV?" 

I must tell them, sternly, this is not the case!

 

We are within a remorseless crusher

Between two lovely, nonogenarian mothers

And a darling cherub, who is growing wiser, 

Whilst performing on a new stage every day! 

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Everyone knows we have our ‘retirement time.’

“Of course, you can do it!”      What can we say?

“Yes, we can help you, but it will be a crush!”

No wonder our brains are now going to mush.

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John Botterill

Sat 9th Apr 2022 20:52

Thanks Kj and Rasa., for your positive responses.
I wouldn't go so far as to say I wish I was working again, Kj. Definitely not!

I think your idea for poetic challenges is a great one, Rasa. Count me in! 😀
It would be fascinating to see what our poetic friends do with the same stimuli 😁

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kJ Walker

Sat 9th Apr 2022 07:11

I often speak to retired people who tell me that they are busier now than during their working lives.
I'm wishing my life away, because I can't wait to retire.

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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 9th Apr 2022 06:28

I love this John! Hehe, it was actually a poetry competition that set the task of using the word 'crush' in a ten line poem. Perhaps we should all set each other different tasks like this from time to time to keep our creative juices flowing? A ten line poem with a different word that must be used? I think Stephen Gospage may be keen, as well as some of our other poet friends here!

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John Botterill

Mon 4th Apr 2022 22:49

Thanks Holden and Stepneb A for the likes.

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John Botterill

Mon 4th Apr 2022 06:35

Thanks Stephen 😀 No, you couldn't make it up, could you? Now I work harder. For zero pay
Poor me, poor me, pour me drink haha! 😂
(The old ones are the best. Or that's what I tell myself!)

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 3rd Apr 2022 21:55

Well done, John. A lovely piece of verse. Interesting that in retirement one builds a life that seems busier than the working one.

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