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Hot Line

When my dad passed away,

I began to wish for

A number I could call,

To check he was all right.

 

‘All right’ is relative, of course,

But the purpose of this hot line

Would be to spread out and discuss,

To ask the unanswered questions,

To say the things we had not said,

 

And to speak to one that I knew,

Not the wizened, angry, lost soul

I had sat with that last weekend,

But Dad, taking us to London,

On trips he could barely afford,

To watch cricket, see the Tower,

And to fall asleep on the bus,

As we listened to his stories,

Resting on his kind, broad shoulder.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 3rd Apr 2022 17:10

Thanks to you, John. That's most kind. And thanks to K.Lynn for liking this one.

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John Botterill

Sat 2nd Apr 2022 21:41

Beautiful poem. Written with great compassion and skill, Stephen. Very moving.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 1st Apr 2022 17:23

Thanks to Steve, Hugh, Julie, Rudyard, Holden and Russell for liking this poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 1st Apr 2022 17:21

Many thanks for your kind reaction, Ursula and John. Yes, Ursula, the death of someone close, however long expected, as always a sudden break and how wonderful it would be to be able to contact them one last time to clear some things up. One always tries to remember them as they were and not, as you say, John, as they had become.

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John Coopey

Thu 31st Mar 2022 19:13

Lovely sentiment and language, Stephen. Let us hope our children remember the better men we once were rather than the shadow of ourselves we will become.

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Thu 31st Mar 2022 18:50

Beautiful, Stephen. Yes, if only we had that number! 💗👍

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