Carnival
In time of war, things fit to you tightly:
No bagginess, no slack, no loose surplus.
War exposes us as human beings,
And makes us face ourselves for what we are.
The carnival starts; you put on your mask
And chase the local girl. Later, waking,
You hear a distant cry from your old friend,
Pleading for your help through the gas and mud.
But you are too warm; she is beside you,
Keen as a whip. The cry melts into silence.
Next day comes the knock. Sad entertainers
Dance quietly around the carousel.
In the mirror, you see your guilty grin
Fall down backwards, to where no one hears you.
Stephen Gospage
Sun 3rd Apr 2022 17:08
Thank you, John and Ray. I appreciate your comments very much. It is interesting that you highlight perplexity and dislocation in the poem. It was one of those poems which started out in one direction and finished up somewhere slightly different, so I suppose that those two words could also apply to the text itself.
And thanks to Rudyard, Pete, Holden and Leon for liking the poem.