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Professionals

I didn’t have to do this job;

There were many things on offer,

But somehow I fell into it.

Most days it’s pretty routine:

Emptying the bins and the bags.

But yesterday, everything changed;

The cameras and microphones

Screamed indignation at the world,

While the crows and vultures circled

For a sniff of plastic-wrapped flesh.

Unfamiliar with our task,

We tidied up, without a fuss,

These motionless and stolen lives.

Above all, we're professionals.

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Ukraine

◄ Carnival

First Trip To Kyiv, June 1996 ►

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 7th Apr 2022 09:12

You make an interesting point, Russell. The horror of war and its crimes is now served up on TV in our living rooms. John - you are right. It is sometimes difficult to write these poems, which is why I try to approach each one find a different (and sometimes unusual) angle. I just feel that I have to do it at the moment.

Thanks to both of you for the comments.

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Russell Jacklin

Wed 6th Apr 2022 19:17

This is the commentary to the visuals on Television.
War is grim, but there is always someone somewhere cleaning up.
Enjoyed

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John Botterill

Wed 6th Apr 2022 18:24

Scarily appropriate, Stephen. Accomplished with immense skill as usual. Powerful, if depressing!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 6th Apr 2022 16:45

Thanks a lot, John and K.Lynn. It is fascinating, though perhaps inevitable how the mundane tasks continue against a background of horror. I once met a taxi driver from Beirut who told me how they tried to maintain a normal life against the background of war -shopping, taking kids to school etc.

And thankyou to Julie, Holden and Stephen for liking this one.

K. Lynn

Wed 6th Apr 2022 05:25

Strong imagery here. I like how you put the truly grim reality in the middle and then used irony at the end.

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John Coopey

Tue 5th Apr 2022 20:00

The mundane and the vile in stark neighbourhood.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 5th Apr 2022 19:20

Thank you both, Greg and Leon. I appreciate your encouragement. What is happening in Ukraine is awful and I wanted to find another angle from which to express my anger.

Just low-fat cheese, I'm afraid, Leon.

And thanks to Rudyard for the like.

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Tue 5th Apr 2022 16:19

Don't know what you are on Stephen, but do you know where I can get some? a brilliant trip down yet another wonderful written path courtesy of your clever self!

Cheers matey!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 5th Apr 2022 15:08

Grimly excellent poem, Steve, expressing outrage and disgust in a slant way.

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