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My Mother, Waving Goodbye.

I could see her on the first-floor landing

As I drove off from the car park below,

Her hand was raised, waving gladly.

She was peering, blindly, towards me,

With eyes which had ceased being able to see.

A mother’s smile was on her face

Epitomising all her love and grace.

Β 

I stopped the car to dab my eyes,

She would never see the tears I cried,

When I spotted my mother, waving goodbye

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John Botterill

Wed 20th Apr 2022 10:22

Thanks Holden. Your appreciative comments mean a lot πŸ˜€

Holden Moncrieff

Wed 20th Apr 2022 02:00

A genuinely moving poem, John! 🌷 I loved the lines
"A mother's smile was on her face
Epitomising all her love and grace." 😊

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John Botterill

Tue 19th Apr 2022 22:54

Thanks Clare, John, Jock and Tom for the likes. πŸ˜€

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John Botterill

Tue 19th Apr 2022 19:38

Thanks Ursula. Your kind words mean a lot πŸ˜€

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Tue 19th Apr 2022 18:18

Lovely poem, John. Well done to you!πŸ‘

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John Botterill

Tue 19th Apr 2022 18:10

Thanks Stephen A., Stephen G and Russell for your appreciative comments. πŸ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 19th Apr 2022 17:52

A very true, poignant poem, John.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 19th Apr 2022 16:49

Beautifully understated

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 19th Apr 2022 10:36

πŸ˜₯

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