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A New Dawn

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Just something about you, I can't decide.
Like you are hiding something deep inside.
Beneath your 60's hat, with its wide brim.
Is there something a bit sad going on within?

Above those painted drops, I see your eyes.
Is there something you're trying to disguise?
Your smile to me, it looks a little incomplete.
Was it time to move on, a new dawn to greet?

Was the 'summer of love' drawing to an end?
No more messages of peace and love to send.
There's something in your look that puzzles me.
A touch of untapped sadness, I think I can see.

                        
                              

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Mike Bartram

Fri 6th May 2022 10:58

Thank you..can you see the b/w picture that goes with this poem, as it doesn't show up for me!

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