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Breakthrough

I'm on a verge of a breakthrough

Divine hands behind mine 

Working all things in favour 

Even those that were turned down 

 

I'm on a verge of a breakthrough

Like no other day or time 

It's time to live up to expectations 

That my Lord has destined to me mine 

 

I'm on a verge of a breakthrough 

From far off land left behind 

Emerging brighter than light 

From the shores graciously divine 

 

I'm on a verge of a breakthrough 

Spells and magic broken on time 

Waking up a sleeping me 

Knocked off long ago, many times 

 

I'm on a very of my breakthrough

Keeping my hands high in prayers 

Hoping to achieve all my dreams 

And make them all come true 

 

I'm on a verge of a breakthrough 

People and angels working for 

Even before I could ask for anything 

God has granted me anything and everything

 

I'm on a verge of a breakthrough 

My heart beats faster than time 

Hoping to control my enthusiasm

To get to places I've always longed for 

 

 

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Sunshine

Tue 28th Jun 2022 17:04

It sure is opened Nigel.

I'm in a position to receive through God's mercy. Doors have opened right on time.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 26th Jun 2022 02:40

Your poetry unlocks
love no longer waits
your poetry unlocks
heart must be open.

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