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A New Life

Sometimes, in villages, you hear old men

Who tut that things are not how they should be.

They knew the boy. It had been a close call.

A few months before, he was still at school,

A cheeky sort, though decent in the round,

But one morning, flaunting teenage stubble,

He joined the beards and testosterone.

The bullet was not long coming. Alex,

Known as ‘tree trunk’, once the local hard man,

Scooped him up and shed tears. Doctors got there,

Just in time; now the boy has come back home.

He limps around, seeming suddenly old.

He doesn’t say much; his smile stops half way.

The limp may go. This new life is for good.

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Ukraine

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Dying in Ukraine ►

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 9th Jul 2022 08:58

Thank you, MC and John for these interesting comments. I appreciate your constructive support, as always. Yes, what begins a war story could indeed have a more universal application. Nothing is new in the current conflict, sadly.

And thanks to Nigel, Frederick, Stephen, Holden and K Lynn for liking. Very grateful for your encouragement.

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John Botterill

Fri 8th Jul 2022 22:30

First rate story telling, Stephen. As MC says, you leave us some gaps for our imagination to fill in. 👍

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 8th Jul 2022 12:25

Intriguing - inviting our interpretations of the circumstances and
the characters involved. Was this war, a gangland dispute?. The
possibilities tease us and stimulate our imaginations.

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