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Ship of Theseus

A repeat paralysis nonpareil, 

out of which one fails

to make heads nor tails; 

and each time the tide

claims another fragment, 

what is it, really, that remains?

 

For, though it is true, 

the Ship of Theseus

has yet to capsize, 

each time the healing

swoops in anew, 

to anaesthetize the wound, 

the timber may be fresh,

but does the backbone

begin to belong

to someone else?

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JOHN F B TUCKER

Thu 28th Jul 2022 21:23

Holden, your poetry is amazing. Discovering you on this site has brightened my life. There is much more stylistic unity in you than in my own work (which spans several decades and phases). Your poetry reads like a book of mysticism, replete with Classical allusion, witty word-play, sound-sexual connectivity, and underlying wisdom. I wish i could sit up in bed and read and reread a book of it!

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 28th Jul 2022 15:03

Thank you so much, John, I really appreciate your kind comment! 😎
It was an attempt to consider the 'Ship of Theseus' thought puzzle in terms of a human being suffering and healing, and whether one is fundamentally changed by those cycles.

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John Botterill

Thu 28th Jul 2022 08:23

Fascinating poem, Holden. Thought provoking... and then some 😎

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