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DEATH OF THE QUEEN

We think of pageantry a wave of the hand

a face behind glass or high on a horse

also of course the rows of pews

where sat at times the blessed, the chosen

and never thought it strange,

 

but that was what we cherished most

engulfed in ordinary lives

the pomp and then the surprising descent

into crowds of you and I

who tried to grasp the glory and wealth

 

in no vainglorious way.

It felt like world without end to us

now her passing seems part of a ritual

a seamless movement from mother to son

on shoulders broad into the fray. 

◄ PIERREPOINT

THE SPIRIT OF JOHN BROWN ►

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raypool

Tue 13th Sep 2022 20:55

Thanks all you likers, a valued and impressive list! I felt compelled to make a contribution at this time and hoped to bring some personal ideas to the poem. Sorry I can't mention everyone by name this time, forgive me.

Interesting that you mention celebrity and fame Graham. They are often ephemeral which is the very opposite of what the Royals offer. However I do think the wave of reaction we are seeing is a testament to a shift upwards to an almost celestial level.

Thanks Stephen. There is an element I feel of the superhuman
in the way the continuity of reign is designed and not without some sadness in itself for those involved.

A good point Mark. A foot in both camps. most capable a true professional! As you know, the planning down to the last detail was never left to chance. An ex army friend of mine tells me of grass being actually painted in a BAOR camp in Germany , but that's another story.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 12th Sep 2022 15:41

She was far removed yet with us - an extraordinary accomplishment throughout her long life.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 10th Sep 2022 16:23

Thank you, Ray. I think you have touched the truth when you mention 'ritual' and 'seamless'. Behind the genuine sadness, there is an impressive and reassuring continuity.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 9th Sep 2022 21:19

In this god-awful world of fame and celebrity we hear the word 'legend' bandied around like two pennyworth of anything.

A true 'legendary' woman dies and not a word. But she was above all that anyway!

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