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WESTMINSTER HALL - LYING IN STATE

Earthbound, spellbound in thrall to majesty

without a sound. Silence that fills some monstrous need

never to be satisfied with so many mouths to feed. 

Still they come with muffled tread as if their mourning

might raise the dead. In years to come these thoughts

now fresh will set like the stone of ancient walls

witness to a light that dies, a silence weeping to the skies. 

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◄ THE SPIRIT OF JOHN BROWN

ON SEEING JUPITER 26 9 22 ►

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raypool

Wed 21st Sep 2022 18:52

Thanks folks for the likes; Nigel, Frederick, Graham, Jennifer, Stephen, Holden and Flyntland.

Thanks Stephen. This is one of those where I was dwelling on human nature as often I do. I always believe that people's motivations are often unconscious and so a secret to them, so I like to probe my own to give reason where none is forthcoming. That may sound harsh I know.

Always a pleasure to hear from you Laura and to garner a response both thoughtful and to my mind complimentary. I refer you to my response to Stephen's comment.

Cheers Greg, that's the third poem in a series it seems, along with so many others. Glad it found favour.

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Tue 20th Sep 2022 10:29

Another good one from you, Ray, about this whole business.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:56

Yes, I like this. And I could hazard several guesses, re what Stephen says about the motivations.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 18th Sep 2022 17:46

Profound and subtly disturbing, Ray. The motivations for and the consequences of mourning are little understood, I suspect.

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